I'm lost, in this narrative(the alternate timeline where Judy was taken under her aunt's bingo wings), Judy has always been on desk duty, why would Angie think that she was the best officer?
With the most recent chapters(as of the fourth of Janurary), I feel like some formatting work, so they suffer from the dreaded wall of text description.
They are rather hard to read smoothly.
Right, I have to ask, how the does something with as much actual story as this get an award?
Honestly, there's less than fifteen actual story chapters, the rest are options.
I'm not harassing you, I just want to know how it's even possible.
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