For a while at the beginning, it was difficult to figure out if the story was going to be about Bethany and Steven or Linda and Danny, but then it became clear that you were just giving a brief glimpse of how Linda and Danny's lives had drastically changed.
I was surprised and a little upset that Steven's character passed away because of the connection I had begun to feel as a reader; however, the way Bethany's character keeps Steven's memory with her was very sweet.
I love how greatly you paid attention to detail throughout the entire story. This was an amazing read and extremely heartwarming. Fabulous work!!!!
Absolutely touching. I love how the child asks his father straight out if the father was going to beat the prissy out of him. It's amazing how a happy memory can turn someone's mood completely around. I just can't help but wonder if the son and father grow closer after this or what happens.
I am definitely going to have to read more of your work.
Omg! I did horrible on this quiz and I love the Twilight saga. I have read all the books but not for over a year. This was a tough quiz but I appreciate how you captured alot of small details. I haven't seen a quiz this tough since I was in school. Very well done.
Maybe I will try and retake this quiz after I reread the book and hopefully do better.
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