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Review by Jo Stewart Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the idea of a one-sided conversation with a bee. Sometimes I definitely wish that I could politely ask bees not to be around me. That would make summer so much more stress-free, wouldn't it? This poem made me laugh and was very relatable. Bravo.
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Review by Jo Stewart Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Even though I find baseball more entertaining, I have come to appreciate football. I like that you talk about each team's style of consistency and gameplay. I also totally agree about how the men have to really strive, as football is a very dangerous sport.

P.S. A football has more than two sides.
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