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Review of Pearl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I didn't get the idea of this. Like your word choices were good but it should have been more detail with what you were talking about.
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Review of Solitude  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I liked the idea of this. I think if you made the idea about a certain topic it would be better.
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Review of The Beast  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I loved the theme of this. It was a great idea and suspenseful.
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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I loved this. It was very relatible and inspiring.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I think this was about a ghost. Maybe more description with what was outside the window.
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Review of A Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This poem would have been better with an better picture of an idea. I love your word choices but ,maybe more imagery about playing and the grave.
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Review of Love Despised  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I loved this. It is so relatible to teenage girls. It was great word choices and im sure more than teenage girls can relate.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This was really short but good. The idea was good but i think imagery of the thoughts and more detailed words would help.
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Review of Remember When  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I loved the idea of this. The rhyming was great and it is something everyone can relate too.
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Review of Life of Teenager  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
You did a good job with this information. Very relatible.
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Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
This needs a lot more detail.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I love how this is a real world problem. Relationship abuse should be addressed in more stories.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I really liked this poem. Insted of imagery where you can picture something I felt like I could hear it.
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Review of Fingerprints  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
This poem could have been a lot longer.
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Review of He Will Tell You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
I really didn't understand the concept of the poem. It flowed really well but I couldn't tell what it was talking about.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The imagery in this made me feel sick, It was really good.
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Review of Five minutes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem because I can relate because it's true that your whole world could fall apart in 5 minutes.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked how I can relate and know what the author is talking about because today you hear so much about relationship abuse. Also how in the end of the poem it talked about how she was finally free and how she's just as happy independent as she was in a relationship with obviously the wrong guy.
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