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Review of MOM AND ME  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a wonderful tribute to your mother and all mothers!! I can say from personal experience, that a loving mother should never be taken for granted. I had a wonderful, self sacrificing mother who did all she could for me and my siblings. Unfortunately she passed away some time ago. I never really knew how much she meant to me until she was gone. By far, my favorite line of this piece is "the moment a child is born, a mother is born. A mother never existed before." You said a mouthful there!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Review of Naked Santa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OMG!!!! This was too funny. You took a timeless Christmas poem and turned it into something weird and twisted. But it worked great!!! I loved how you included old story characters as the main characters for this poem. Hearing Tiny Tim and Tom Sawyer talk trash was hilarious!!! Great poem for the season.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was a very uplifting article!! First off, your birthday lining up with scriptures in the Bible was amazing. (I'm going to see if there is a message for me in His Word using my birthday). Phillippians 4:13 is one of my favorites as well. I say it to myself all the time. I even say it at work. My coworkers give me funny looks but I dont care. I know where my help comes from; it comes from the Lord!!! I too used to be real shy, especially during my grade school years. But through God's strength, I have come out of my shell. Thats why I'm here at WDC!!! Stay encouraged and be blessed!!!!
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Review of Treasure Yourself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kymee!!! I almost got choked up when I read this poem. The words are simple but the meaning behind those words is very strong. I cant tell you how many times I've felt down and out and that no one cared or loved me. It's like I'm invisible. But these words make me believe that I can do all things. I have the Victory!!!
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Review of Zombie Attack  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Yes I'm a zombie too!!!! LOL What a clever poem. Keep up the good work. Good luck!!!!
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Review of Whispers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very touching and sweet poem. There was a lot of heart and soul put into it. Keep up the good work!!!
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Review of A moment in time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Awesome love story!!! You used a lot of detail, which I think is great. It really pulls you into the story. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Black  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a very interesting poem. You really do seem to bare your heart in soul in this piece. I look forward to reading more from you. Good luck!!
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Review by 32Queen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
This looks to be the start of a very cute love story between 2 youngsters. I do see a lot of grammar and punctuation errors, but that will get better with practice and experience. I still make A LOT of mistakes myself. Good job and good luck!!!
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Review of My Heart Knew  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really like this piece. You can feel the tug of war the woman has between her boyfriend and the cook. I think alot of women and men for that matter have been down this road before. You put it together beautifully!!!
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