This is a very good story and really pulled me in right away.. The fire was terrible and described so real.There were some writing errors but I realize you were not concerned about that right now. Also, the characters are interesting. You have an excellent ability with conversation and describing interactions. Everything flowed really well keeping interest going. I hope you continue it soon
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