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Review of Your Today  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Amazing but you did a mistake see you said "But time past is now history" the grammar there is all wrong your supposed to say "But the time that pasted is now history" that is the right sentence everything else is soooo soooo true.it was put in the right order.
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Review of Here we come  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AMAZING ITS SO DRAMATIC I LOVED IT
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Rated: E | (4.0)
the ending was amazing you make it sound so real but being more descriptive could of helped and some similes i liked the story there is a little comedy like when you said "Even insects and bugs would eat you if you gave them the chance." i liked it like i said but descriptive more please you could of been descriptive.
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