I have always liked dark poetry. This was a good read. There is a smooth flow all the way to the end. In the part where the boy graduates, I was deeply involved with the character. There wasn't really a part that I didn't like. The ending brought it all together.Basically, it was a clear and focused read. It brought me in to the end. Thanks for posting your work.
You took me into the darkness with your poetry. Darkness III is a great read. I can relate as much of my poetry is along the same sea dwelling path that you have chosen here.
My favorite part that wrapped it all together: "Now I reside in such a place As never should be seen Except by those who've touched the waters Of the Darkness Sea."
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