I read the article in its entirety, so well written I believed it was from the war at hand. The only objection I would have is about the F word. I seems to me that it could be as well written with a substitute for that word.
Since I am a woman it dulls my senses to hear or read this word. I indeed have great respect for one who can write a story such as this. It is great, and if I thought of discontinuing reading, I was compelled to read on. I really think it was great, and expressed the sentiments of the men very well.
judy2440
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