This story is amazing. Hey the detail included was fantastic, and shows that you obviously put a lot of time and effort into this peice. I enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue to write, because you have a lot of potential.
Great job,
Keep up the good work!
Great uses of figurative language. I love the metaphors, especially the fact that the entire peice is essentially a metaphor. I would be very happy to discus this peice, and talk about how you can use you skills in writing to make even more works.
Great job
Keep up the good work!
I really like the flow of this poem.
I especially liked the imagery for the flowers.
Great work,
Keep it up, and I hope to see another work from you soon.
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