A great story, Cheryl! Well written with believable & likeable characters and a great story line, great choice of names too ;). Most moms are meddlers and just want their children to be happy...even if it is the third time around. I could relate to Mrs. Webb on that. The dialog flowed naturally, and I liked the part where Jenna and Jason first meet and the awkwardness they were feeling at being so obviously thrown together, but their honesty and humour pull them through. I find I want to check back later and find out how things are working out for them. Maybe a sequel?
Keep on Writing! :)
~ Joyce (J.M. Legel)
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