Perfect, Ultimate Mara! You are so discriptive and put your reader right in the story! I fell Patrick's irritation, like it or not. And Jess's fear is heart wrenching. Thank you for another wickedly awesome story, and as always I can't wait for more.
Your wit and humour never cease to amaze me. The love radiates from these characters as does the recognizable Gibbs charm. It's a beautiful twist the the tale we NCIS fans love so much and wouldn't it be AMAZING if they pulled somthing this heart wrenching? A masterpiece work once again, Mara.
As always, I am moved beyond words by your work, Friend O Mine. As a patriot and American you know I was in tears.
I can taste the smoke and feel the sweat. I can also feel the relief and guilt when the soldier realizes he is now home. Thank you for another amazing story.
SL Britton
OH BF!!!! I have tears dripping down my cheeks right now!!!!! I can see your little Inspiriation right now and YOU KNOW how much I love him :) This tale is truly gut wrenching and any mother's worst night mare. It truly reminds you of how short life is and how it change change in an instant!!!!
You know I am a sucker for a good romance. For YOU of all people, to come up with a moving E RATED romance.... I AM SHOCKED! SEE I told you that you could do it BF! You just had to stretch your style a bit and there you have it! I am proud of you. All of the vivid descriptions you generally use to shock and sicken are found here to showcase a perfect setting and strong emotions. Awesome job!
S.L.Britton
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SEE I told you that you could do it BF! You just had to stretch your style a bit and there you have it! I am proud of you. All of the vivid descriptions you generally use to shock and sicken are found here to showcase a perfect setting and strong emotions. Awesome job!