Excellent job with this poem I especially liked the end, every day I am happy walking on raindrops, very poetic my friend, this was an amazing write and I'm glad I got to read it.
This does sound like a song, but I hope you really are not giving up. You have wonderful talent my friend it shows all the way through this poem. You did a great job with the flow and the imagery in this. I found my self singing along as I was reading it. It is always a joy to read such talent thank you for sharing this.
Your Friend
Journey
This was an amazing poem and so true, so much can happen in just a moment, you summed everything up in this, fantastic job, I really enjoyed reading this.
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