Gordon Zany's (joshuajenner) Reviews

Gordon Zany

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#4332427

Review of Waiting

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: E

| (2.5)

Hmm, I would say that this is written fairly well. But lacks, to me at least, any particular impression. I would say that it seems, simple, neither remarkably good or bad. I find no fault in it, and I believe you've conveyed the meaning well enough. I can rate it on lack of fault, but am unable to on merit I'm afraid. I hope you do not mind my candidness.

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#4331769

Review of Fun facts with the great Dr. Seuss

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: E

| (5.0)

You were right, it was interesting.

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#4331762

Review of upcoming feet stories.

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: 13+

| (1.0)

I'm sorry, you've lost me, Star Wars Rebels? no sir, no.

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#4331735

Review of No Easy Way Out

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: 18+

| (2.5)

I think some of the sentence structure should be worked on in parts, and a few typos which I'm sure you can find. Overall an interesting story.

5

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#4331731

Review of Crying Tears of Pain

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I'm not a very good judge of poetry to be honest, though I can say that I understood it's meaning and felt something of what, you as the writer, were trying to convey. As I said I'm not a great judge of such things, though I can confer that I did like it.

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#4331513

Review of All Skies Are Gray

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I loved it, I love poetry, and I really wish I could write like this. I feel I lack the experience and vocabulary to accurately describe, and do justice this piece, alas I don't read enough of poetry to give you a good review, but I can at least say that it made me feel, and that is what poetry has always meant to me, it not only makes you think, but allows you to feel.

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#4331496

Review of Cute Guy Tim

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I have to say that was well written. But for comedy the obvious intention is to make the reader laugh, and well done, I found it delightfully entertaining and you made me giggle a fair amount. I can't really point out any flaws as I didn't see any. But, I'm a novel person myself, and if this interesting perspective were ever put into a character in such a novel, filled with interesting stories and funny antics such as this, I would very much enjoy reading it as well.

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#4331472

Review of The Night Terror

Review by Gordon Zany

Rated: ASR

| (2.0)

Oh, that had an eerie feel to it. I'd say you have the right idea, though you may be rewarded if you tried rewriting it, there was a lack of detail that I would personally have enjoyed, the small things are what, to me, help create the larger picture, even in a short story.