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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice article, Keep it up .
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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
It was a nice short story , it was getting interesting on the way and then you cut it short . I would like to read some more about your mother . She seems like an interesting character .
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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
helping so much , i want to start my own but i dont know how .
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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Such an interesting story . is there a part two ? i believe her adventure has just began as she is being sucked into the time machine , is that right ?...... there are a few error that you need to work on otherwise you are good to go . keep writing !!
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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
wow ! it was a happy ending but still a sad one . it really moved ! i hope your sister finds peace . i loved this piece of writing .
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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (2.0)
i'd ask em to take me with them !
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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i like it though , it had some tough words in within . Could you please simpler words . i really enjoyed reading through though


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Review by Derrick Hill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow ! what an interesting story , it got me going . I feel like the young boy whos looking for what the meaning of success is . Its like the whole story is talking about me , lol. it was some good piece , though with a few grammatical errors . i loved it though .
Keep on writing !!


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