I really enjoyed reading this story, It kept me interested, and the descriptions were worded nicely. I think I need to re-read it a couple of more times, because the ending is still very vague to me. It could be just me, but I find myself going back to the last few paragraphs to try to see what I missed. Sorry for the rather vague comment, but if I find some more helpful suggestions (for you and for me), I'll let you know.
A nice read.
John
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