what a beautiful and haunting piece of writing Quill awards here it comes. I think this is a wonderfully written item with an edge.
It captures the tortured soul of the beast of which you are writing about. I think this is a perfect piece. Lisa you have outdone yourself with this piece this time. The tortured tiger is terribly heart broken.
hey my man, I am always getting a royal chewing out at work. It seems the boss thinks the sun rises and sets in his son n laws ...shall we say head!
Everything the guy does is right, to hear the boss tell it, he thinks the guy's some sort of perfection. He kisses his aXX if you ask me. but your poem really hits home with me, you see.
I think it was very good and creative.
Hey J.M., This story was savage!
I was surprised by the deaths of the nine children! I can't express my disgust with anyone who could do such a thing. That was one crazy dude. I'd hate to meet up with him any where. William was as crazy as they come. He actually thought he was putting these kids out of pain I guess. I thought you did a good job I don't agree with your assessment of our Belief in God. but that debate is not for a review. The writing ability you have is very good, There were strong characters.
Hello Tim, this is a very cool poem I can really relate being one who is in to sports pretty heavily. I think this item is very well written and it has a nice rhythm and the rhymes are perfect and there are many of them. I'd say this came to you as you witnessed a sporting event or such. It seems likely. thanks for sharing.
hello I just read and want to review this item it is very unique. I liked the title "Shrunk into his hand", it really speaks to what the whole story is all about. A boy gets shrunk on his way to his friends house and they try to investigate to see why. I added a chapter to the end of this I hope I did it justice. You have some well written items in this story. Many of your writers did a very good job with their writing. I appreciate you sharing this item with me and I look forward to eventually finding out why he shrunk.
hi Lisa, what an excellent poem.
I love what you are saying, your message is so clear. The poem is clearly stated. you are speaking about love, love of self, of earth, of our fellow man. it is a message that is as old as the hills, however it is not taken especially in these days. you speak of violence, and hate which are abundant in this day. a very good and clearly stated poem for sure!
Greetings PurplePrincess, I think this is a real nice poem. It has a lot going for it. It rhymes and it flows well it also has a great rhythm. you did a fine job creating this item. I hope you had some good luck in the contest for which it was entered. "The Monthly Poetry Contest, that is where I found it, in the forum.
I do not generally give reviews, however I came across this item on the review page and looked a few of your poems in this collection, I must say I was truly impressed. you have an excellent ability to bring forth emotion from the reader. some of the poems were light hearted while others were Spiritual and quite emotional.
to S.A.Gibbins, this was a swell long poem that told a story about a cat. I enjoyed it greatly you did a fine job writing this story poem . It had the best rhymes I could imagine and the rhythm made me sway and almost sing. This would be a perfect poem for children it is a nice format. thank you for sharing
I am reviewing the short story “Legacy”
I found it to be fast-paced and very real.
The facts were correct for the time, which was
The turn of the 20th century. The narration was
Good, I like the way you told the story with out
A bunch of fluff. It is the sad tail of a mixed marriage
Between a white man and a Native American of the
Cherokee tribe. They married had children and dealt
With prejudices of the time. The Indian woman lost her
Baby in a fire started by towns people to burn them out.
She lost her legs in the fire and almost died. I don’t want to
Give away the whole story people should read it for themselves.
It sounds like a good episode of the old show ”Gunsmoke”.
It’s a great story and it is nominated for a quill award as it should
Be. I will vote for it. Action Adventure.
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