hey my man, I am always getting a royal chewing out at work. It seems the boss thinks the sun rises and sets in his son n laws ...shall we say head!
Everything the guy does is right, to hear the boss tell it, he thinks the guy's some sort of perfection. He kisses his aXX if you ask me. but your poem really hits home with me, you see.
I think it was very good and creative.
Hello Tim, this is a very cool poem I can really relate being one who is in to sports pretty heavily. I think this item is very well written and it has a nice rhythm and the rhymes are perfect and there are many of them. I'd say this came to you as you witnessed a sporting event or such. It seems likely. thanks for sharing.
hello I just read and want to review this item it is very unique. I liked the title "Shrunk into his hand", it really speaks to what the whole story is all about. A boy gets shrunk on his way to his friends house and they try to investigate to see why. I added a chapter to the end of this I hope I did it justice. You have some well written items in this story. Many of your writers did a very good job with their writing. I appreciate you sharing this item with me and I look forward to eventually finding out why he shrunk.
Greetings PurplePrincess, I think this is a real nice poem. It has a lot going for it. It rhymes and it flows well it also has a great rhythm. you did a fine job creating this item. I hope you had some good luck in the contest for which it was entered. "The Monthly Poetry Contest, that is where I found it, in the forum.
to S.A.Gibbins, this was a swell long poem that told a story about a cat. I enjoyed it greatly you did a fine job writing this story poem . It had the best rhymes I could imagine and the rhythm made me sway and almost sing. This would be a perfect poem for children it is a nice format. thank you for sharing
Write on
John
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