\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/johannanight
Review Requests: OFF
3 Public Reviews Given
3 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by Johanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very creative--I love that we can almost taste the plot though the story is just getting started. Brilliant writing and description; I could visualize the characters and their interactions in my head. You are a wonderful writer; keep up the good work~
2
2
Review of Raven and Abby  Open in new Window.
Review by Johanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Love your creativity. And the names--I though that it would be the other way around upon reading it, but that was a really nice twist...great beginning! Although sometimes you switch between tenses, this has a lot of potential. Keep up the good writing!
2 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/johannanight