\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/joesramblings
Review Requests: OFF
6 Public Reviews Given
6 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by Joe Schmoe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good. The only thing I'd change is the format. the format was hard to read. But the story was really good. I'm hoping for more.
2
2
Review by Joe Schmoe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
can i join?
3
3
Review by Joe Schmoe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was really great. Although I suspected the ending the way the story was set made me completely dive into the story and forget. Although I felt that you made conner too vampire-like to just simply turn things around the way you did. But I really did enjoy it. Just a little to work on but great.
3 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/joesramblings