Very well written and a very powerful subject. Love and death is never an easy topic to tackle, I have known enough of both in life to know that this is true. To critique your writing is pretty easy, your sentence structure with the exception of some minor errors is pretty good as well as your use of grammar, the only thing I would caution is the size of your font. Perhaps you were trying to preserve space and that's understandable, but it makes the it difficult for the reader. For a journal, small font works because typically only you'll be reading it, but for an audience it makes it difficult. Your story is gripping and engaging, very well written. Keep up the good work.
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