T. MARK GRAY's (joehero1966) Reviews

T. MARK GRAY

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14 Total Reviews Given

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#1715211

Review of One step ahead to nowhere, rev.

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

My dogma just got run over by your karma! Seriously, though, this is a very good poem. It flows well, and the imagery is great. The road metaphor tends to over used, but you pulled it off Quite well. "Free verse" is also not easy to do well, but it apears to me that you have tallent. great work!
p.s. I hope you weren't offended by the joke, but it came to mind when I read your poem.

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#1659178

Review of Interest-Value-Time-and-Money

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Very catchy! I like a good pun, But I love a bad pun. This falls somewhere in between. One thing to keep in mind is that money is also power(energy?) So keep charging on! I look forward to reading more of your writing. good work. Ihave to give you some credit!

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#1654016

Review of Where Were You

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Wow! I am adding you to my favorites! your poetry has impressed me. I am rarely harsh in my criticism of poetry, but likewise, I tend not to "gush" either you have a rare talent, and I am looking forward to reading even more of your work. Keep it up, you've got a fan base now!

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#1654013

Review of Shadows

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I really like this poem! In my humble opinion you have a gift. you just need to trrust yourself more.
As a fan of vampire stories I was swept away, and yet you left me wondering if it was nothing more than, well, a shadow. keep up the great work, and again trust youinner voice. well done!

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#1654007

Review of Listen To My Heart (Now with audio)

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: E

| (4.0)

What a sweet sad song. I would very much like to hear it set to music! We all have our share of bad times in relationships, but in the moment we forget that, and feel as if we are th only one. You have a good sense of rhyme and meter, this could also work as just a poem. good job!

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#1645246

Review of Worst U.S. President

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: E

| (2.5)

This could have been a great poll, but there werent enough choices. If you just added a
the choice of "other" it would have been a lot better. I'm not sure that any of the choices are even in the bottom ten. More choices would definetely been better. nice idea though.

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#1638934

Review of The Review Mixer

Review by T. MARK GRAY

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Thank you for starting and maintaining this service. I am still new to WRITING.COM and these services are very helpfull for meeting others, and learning my way around the website. I highly recomend THE REVIEW MIXER to anyone who discovers WRITING.COM. Thanks again.