Enthralled! That how I was reading this story. I don't know or care if there are any errors anywhere. All I wanted to do was read to the end. You've done a great job.
Have you tried to get it published? I would think a magazine might pick it up, but it might also be good as one of those small gift books around Christmas time.
Thanks for writing this and don't stop writing.
Joan
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