It's nice to know that there are people out that appreciate those in nursing homes.Your rhyme is very good and I could tell that those words came from the heart.
I liked this poem very much. It is full of love from the heart to someone special. If we all could be loved like this it would be a better world. Thank you for sharing. I'll make this one of my favorites. It makes you feel good inside and once again the love can be felt.
You said in your bio that "you're not an expert, but this item is close to it. I really couldn't find anything wrong with this poem. Good job! It was very emotional in that your love and pain is very vivid. Nicely written!!
This poem's rhyme was very good. It was bit sad though. The love for her is perceived. With the words imagine being repeated repetitiously throughout the poem, one feels like he or she is being taken on a journey of your past life with her which is good because I believe that is your point. Very good job.
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