That was such a good story. I wanted to keep on reading but then it stopped.
Great detail and you could really feel the relationship between the characters. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time fearing that they would die because of those evil Russians.
5/5 This story made my night much better by cheering me up.
Oh my God!
I love reading the IMs and Emails sent from one teen to other for some reason.
It was really good please make more. Chris is a retard thinking tAlKiN lYk dIs Is KoOl
lol i'll be reading more of your work soon.
Great story
The story was OK, typical high school relationship dramas. You have to work on revising though because there was a lot of spelling errors and
some lines didn't make scene other than that good story line. Poor Ashley, Jacquie is a bitch and Matt is a Jerk.
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