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Review of Angel Hair  Open in new Window.
Review by J.L.G Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
That was a great discription of emotion. I really understood what she was feeling. I had an ex that didn't like my long hair either. You have a talent for writing relatable emotions. I can only imagine what a novel of yours would be like. :)

Thank you for sharing and keep wirting!!
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Review of WHAT IS LOVE?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This should be read by more men! I think that it pinpoints the fact that women want more time then they get. This is so true! Thank you for posting this.
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Review by J.L.G Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
That was funny! I like the idea and the delivery. I would be very interested to read more if there is going to be. Thank you for sharing your humor, it is very appreciated. :)
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Review of The Nature Trail  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That was a very funny storoem. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful tribute to her.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This was a great short story. I think that you have a lot of potental.
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Review of Kitten Trouble  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was hilarious! There is nothing like a car sized kitten to get someones attention. I think that you hit the nail on the head when you wrote this for the contest. Congratulations! If there is going to be a second installment, I would love to read it.
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Review of Whatever  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Beautiful.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was amazing! Simple to follow but very deep and descriptive. I enjoyed it so very much. There are so many males in the world that don't appreciate the females that live along side them. I hope one day that I can write something as powerful.
Thank you for the tribute to the WDC community.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Although I am not religious, I still see the beauty in this.
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Review of WHO DONE IT?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Humorous. I liked how the Doc strung out the detective.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Humorous look at a child's innocence.
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Review of Twin Towers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thank you for that. It was very well written.
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Review of My Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was a truly sweet writing.
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Review of Old Leafy Lane  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was amazing! I actually started to cry. You have a gift for writing poetry. Please keep up the good work and I definitely look forward to reading more of it :)
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Review of Bullet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That is a great poem.

I am glad that you still have your love. :)
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Review of Buddy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was emotional and heartfelt. I am so sorry about your loss.
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