You have a very pretty voice. The lyrics are very sweet and I can tell when you sing those words that they mean something to you. The song was definitely made for you. Also the beat is very catchy. :) Good job, keep up the great work.
Beautiful poem, a lot of people now a days are seeking themselves and trying to find their sense of self worth. This applies to me as well I am still trying to explore myself and find the person that I truly am inside. Finding that person and giving my own approval of worthiness to myself is not an easy task. So I definitely can relate to this poem, wonderful job and I can't wait to read more of your works. Have a nice day.
Was not sure what to entirely expect when I clicked on this poem, yet I was not completely surprised when reading it either. However, this poem is tastefully done and your title is clever as well. Have a nice day... :D
Beautiful, honest feelings and words. I personally where my heart on my sleeves all of the time so it is hard for me to even put up a door to love. But having my heart on my sleeves is just as difficult as putting a wall up. When you want to love and are searching for love all of the time like I do (I wish I didn't) it is so hard to keep my emotions in check. However I am slowly learning that I need to take time out for myself, to do the things I need to do for my future, and then love will find me when the time is right. Thankfully I have finally learned this just wish it could have happened earlier. :) Good job my friend.
Your words are so meaningful and thoughtful, this poem actually settles with me in a good way because I myself just left a relationship in January and I too was weighing my options and trying to make a decision not just for me but for the both of us. It was a difficult one but after a year and two months of being together we were not getting very far and it was not fair for the both of us to continue going through the motions of our relationship with no hope for a better outcome. So I'm very glad to hear your words and know that I am not the only one who ever had to make such a hard decision to either stay or go. So thank you, you are a fantastic writer and I will definitely be reading more from your portfolio.
You had told me once before that not all seizures are the same and I understand that better now. Also for your wife to tell you what to expect when she has seizures is a really good idea. Jon is like your wife in a way because he does not have seizures that often so it would be a good idea for me to ask him what happens when he has his seizures. If and when Jon ever has one around me I definitely have a better grasp about what to expect in a way. I knew that some seizures caused people to swallow their tongues but I never knew that you could put something in their mouth to keep it open as an airway. Otherwise I had no idea that I knew a little more than I thought. Although reading this definitely decreased some of my anxiety about dealing with seizures, if I ever need to which I might. All I have left to say is bravo my friend for being able to be there for your wife and for also being able to share your knowledge with the world. From the bottom of my heart, "God has blessed you in more ways than one." Have a wonderful day my friend, talk to you again soon.
Honestly my friend, I have told you on countless occasions how your writing is absolutely amazing and how I relate to your writings about you and wife. I realize it mostly comes from years of experience with how to take care of your wife when she is having a seizure but it is so amazing how you talk about her seizures without sounding scared. I have yet to experience my boyfriend have a seizure although he has told me that there have been occasions at home where he has had one. While I have yet to experience him having seizures it still scares me because I wonder if he ever had one when I was around I would be unnerved and scared not knowing what to do or how to handle it. I have only ever seen someone have a seizure once during Spanish class one time and I was most definitly scared and shaken by the experience and so if Jon were ever to have one while with me I would probably act in the same way. I hope that he never has one when I am around but if he ever does I hope to not be so scared and be able to help him. Anyway just another worry of mine. Thank you again for sharing your stories of you and your wife, and thank you also for listening to my stories and questions about my boyfriend and I. Have a nice day my friend, hope to hear from you soon. I still can't wait to hear your response on the last email I sent you.
Again my friend I am deeply impressed by your words of wisdom and your words of love and triumph when it came to your wife. You are, in my eyes an amazing man and the both of you were really lucky to have been with each other as long as you did.
My boyfriend right now is having some medical problems of his own that have developed while being with him. My boyfriend is 10 years older than me, no I am not a minor, I will be approaching my 20th birthday this May. We love each other very much and what's going on is, his doctor has diagnosed him with MS but the both of us are not sure that it is MS. So he will be going to a neurologist sometime soon and getting some more lab work done before it is certain that he has MS. We have been together now for 5 and a half months and I care about him a lot. I just wish I could do more for him, because all I can do right now is just be here for him and he says that, that is all he needs from me but I just feel like its not enough. I realize that he is grown man and can take care of himself but that doesn't mean I'm not going to worry about him any less. I just don't know what else to do, my friend. Did your wife ever tell you that just your presence was enough? Was there ever a time where you felt this way? I just really need some advice, I'm scared. I don't want to leave him that has not even crossed my mind, I am just scared about what will happen next. Especially since he is already having seizures, losing balance, can barely stand because of the pain in his legs, etc. It breaks my heart to see him in so much pain, I'm sorry to tell you all of this but after reading about you and your wife I figure you would be the perfect person to ask about this kind of thing. Any help or advice you can give would be much appreciated. Thank you for listening. Have a wonderful day.
It is so funny that I happened to pick this to read today. I kid you not last night I myself was trying to write a love letter to my boyfriend of five months and I was able to write down most of what I wanted to say, but as far as the rest of it I wasn't sure how to word it in a way that felt the same way on paper as it does in my heart. You are most definitely one of my favorite writers here on Writing.com. You have an amazing gift of writing as do just about everyone here on the site has but I am officially a fan of your work. Keep writing my friend, have a nice weekend.
It is absolutely beautiful the way you have paid tribute to your wife. Ya'lls love story is definitely one to be shared, thank you for sharing it with us. Keep writing, have a nice day!!
I really like your poem, you are an awesome writer. Its amazing to me how you can say all you need to say in just a few descriptive words for each sentence. I like your writing style, keep writing my friend. Have a nice day.
Wow... I can honestly say that your writing is absolutely liberating, hot and sexy. I am a bisexual and have only ever kissed and felt another girls "girls" but as far as sex goes I have never tried it with either gender. The way you described your whole experience from beginning to end was amazing. All I can really say after that is just OMG!! Fantastic writing, keep it up. Have a nice day.
Sincerely,
Jesse : )
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