I was a little disappointed at the beginning of the story, reading many similarities between the story and 'Alien, and then a few of the "Earth's destruction by meteors" movies. But, when the meat of the story finally showed, I was intrigued, and being pulled in to the story. There is nothing new to the plot, but there are always intriguing new ways of telling it. I was enjoying it, yet the story ended to soon! And of course, we all know that those on board will have to 'start over'. Let's read some of that!
Hm, very nice. The darkness is a wilderness..., very good. I can see a person standing next to the grave of their soul. Truth is light, light is deception! Crazy, but good! Write on.
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