Nice imagery. The way you set the scene. Beautiful. I enjoyed this so much. Love how the star was able to fit inside a small Mason jar. Love it. Great job. Keep writing.
This is such a whimsical piece. Love the tempo of the words and the images you share. You reminded of a Wonderland I used to know though it made me smile to see you dared to be your own self and not a copy of something that has already been done. The read was wonderfully unique in every way. Thank you so much for sharing.
I did not find anything to bring to your eye as far a the grammar goes. Your did very well.
Wow. I enjoyed this so much. The structure was well thought out and developed.
It was such an enjoyable and pleasant read. You really brought the words to life in my mind.
Very well done. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope to read more from you.
This article was very well organized and thought out. I found good encouragement and inspiration. Also I learned new ways I didn't think of to get to know my characters. Thank you for sharing this.
This really opened my eyes to different ways I did not even think to about to promote my profile. Thank you so much for taking the time to aide in my never ending adventure of word crafting.
-JiffyWriter
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