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Giving you a thumbs up!!! I like the way you tell in such order..it makes so easy to understand the point.. Tale of a hand..give a pat on your shoulder. You deserve it
I'm a newbie and I understand the feeling you express in this. I also battling with depression myself and I express it out on words and change it into a music. No words could ever describe the feeling. As part for the writing, I like the expression. And if you are experience some depression, know that there will always someone out there look out for you.
i would like to read the second part..but just my 2 cents opinion though, i like to read something properly arrange like short paragraph, it makes easier to read. I like how the story goes..
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