I really love this. A lot. It is very different and I love that. I like the format as well. It was not long and it kept my attention. I love stuff like this. Keep it up!
I love the rhyme in this. It made it a lot better. I like that it is alligned to the left as well. The way it is set up makes it easier for me to read.
I really like this a lot. I like the way it's typed. It's not like the normal stuff where everything is off to the left. It is centered. Also, I like the font. Everything you did made it easier to read.
I really like this but I don't really like the spacing to be honest. It is really good but the spacing kind of threw my reading off. And the end is so true! It's a hard time but one of the best times.
This is really short. It told but it didn't show. When the person talked, you didn't use quotations. Also, since you didn't do that, I couldn't tell if they were talking or thinking it after that. I like the idea.
I like the line that says "A group gasp ensued as everyone stared at the severed head. Chet swallowed hard and let out a blood-curdling scream.", it was very unique.
I like this because I could really picture it. There was a lot of detail. I like the ending as well. "Come out with your hands up," said Mr. Ferris. They raised their hands. Jordan was still holding the test paper. They were caught. " I will see both you in the principal's office on Monday.", this is really good!
I like this because it tells a story in a way. It tells a story of two people growing together and it was really sweet. I could really picture everything.
I like this a lot because the lines saying "He began to mumble “Save me”. The satanic creature had possessed his corpse. The venom was coursing through his veins. His body shook uncontrollably as the demon entered his soul His pale blue eyes were now red." sounded very good. I really liked it! I could picture it.
I like this very much because I have a cat that I love and it smells horrible if I skip cleaning the box one day. Also, I get aggrivated very easily and I can't stand it.
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