I really enjoyed this story! You illustrated the frustration that countless people who are "successful" face. I love that you made it clear that even though James seems to have everything he could want in a fancy apartment, he prefers a rundown shack on the beach. Your description of the beach and the city contrasted well. Good job, overall.
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