My first impression of this story was that is was just another short story based upon a recent death nothing special. I was very wrong indeed. This story has such a vibrant plot to it that I didn't want to see an ending. Unfortunately, every story has an ending. The ending to me was very nice, a very good wrap up for the story. Well done.
That was intense. I absolutely loved this. My first impression of this was "Lost love? Hmm" thinking it wouldn't be very good but it actually turned out to be really great!!
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