This really had me on the floor. At first I didn't know where it was going, but with all the trouble the poor guy ran into trying to find the sound, just to keep having to go back to the er, really having a bad time, I would say. It seemed, after reading the part on him scratching the scar on his ear, that maybe the sound was "buzzing" in his ear. Than upon reading to the end, it came quite clearly. You really have to stay with the story to see what is going on here. Really fun read. Thanks for posting this.
Erich
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