I loved how the guy was almost hesitant and at the same time he knew what he wanted to do in the end. I also loved how he saw the positive even if he was in jail.
Now for your writing skill, I felt like I actually was the guy! It was extremely fun, I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen
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