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I believe in constructive criticism and honesty. I can adapt my review style to fit the kind of feedback an author is looking for (e.g., developmental suggestions, fine-tuning, proofreading, etc.), but will always try to be as encouraging and helpful as possible.
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Plotting, characterization, dialogue, structure/pacing, and professional considerations. I can also do serviceable technical editing/proofreading, but I'm much better with developmental/creative feedback.
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I read almost everything. I particularly love genre fiction (mystery/thriller and science fiction/fantasy especially) and nonfiction of all kinds.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Positives

I liked the juxtaposition of the animal and human roles in this story. I thought it was a really clever way to subvert expectations, and you did a good job of still capturing the owner-pet relationship while inverting the roles. Nice work!


Suggestions

I would have loved to have seen a little more build-up to the payoff of the switched roles. As it is, the story just kind of lays it out like it's a commonly-understood fact, and I think there's a real opportunity here to subvert your audience's expectations with a little bit of setup and payoff. I think it would be really compelling if we're following a story of a teenage girl who is being distracted from doing her homework by her pet... and if we get a more traditional image of that in our minds first before you pull a bait-and-switch and reveal that the dog is the one doing homework once it has a chance to catch the reader off guard and surprise them.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read and it has a lot of potential. You're off to a great start!


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. The mix of dialogue and description was well balanced and kept the story moving along at a brisk pace.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Positives

You did a great job with the details and description in this piece. There was just enough information to paint a clear picture in the reader's mind, while still leaving enough room for their imagination to fill in the gaps.


Suggestions

From a formatting perspective, you might want to consider employing some paragraph breaks to help structure the piece and make it a little more readable.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed reading this story. Flash fiction stories are always fun to read, and I thought you did a great job with this one.


Suggestions

This isn't specifically a suggestion for the story itself, but I'd highly recommend setting at least one genre other than "Contest Entry" for your piece in order to give potential readers some idea of the story's subject matter.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this story. The details and description were excellent and the overall pace was engaging. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read and thought you did a great job. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job conveying emotion and feeling in this piece. Your use of detail at the beginning helped set the scene and allowed the reader to identify with you as you eventually shared more of your mindset with them. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed reading this item. I thought it was thought-provoking and interesting, and you did a great job of mixing both rhetorical questions and actual questions to get the reader to think. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this item. The imagery and the structure of the piece were both excellent, and you did a great job of capturing the theme that love seems silly or illogical until you experience it for yourself. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. *Smile*


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Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
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Positives

I thought the writing was direct and to the point, and had some really visceral, impactful language for such a short piece.


Suggestions

It's a little unclear what the purpose or goal of this piece is. It's listed as being a draft of a piece of writing in the "Animal" genre, but the intro and the body of the item itself don't really elaborate on that premise.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job making an impactful impression with your writing, but there's a bit of confusion about what this piece is or what the author's intentions with it are, which would be helpful to elaborate upon.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this poem. I particularly liked the fact that you took a common interpretation about the metaphor you were using, and put a spin on it in the first few lines. It was a great way to engage the reader.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a good job with the structure and the pacing; it was a quick, engaging read that kept my interest throughout. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this poem. The imagery and thematic elements were both excellent, and I thought the piece was well structured. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was an engaging, interesting item to read. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a great job with the structure and the imagery; the piece was easy to read and thought-provoking. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I really liked the imagery and the visuals in this piece. I thought you did a great job creating and engaging and immersive poem. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Nice job!


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Positives

I thought you did a great job with the imagery and construction of this item. In just a few short words and stanzas, you really did a great job setting the scene and painting a vibrant picture of Japan for the reader. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Nice work!


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*Train* Positives

I thought you did a great job with the theme and content of this piece. Acts 2 is such a formative piece of scripture for me (our former church spent nearly two years reading through the Book of Acts in its entirety and dissecting it), I read your piece and it instantly brought to mind so many of the moments from Acts as a whole, as well as how integral Acts 2 is to the idea of the modern church. Really well done!


*Train* Suggestions

While I know that the form "quatrain" can cover a lot of ground, structurally speaking, I found it a bit difficult to find a rhythm in reading this piece because each quatrain seems to vary slightly. For example, the first quatrain didn't have any lines with a perfect rhyme, while the second one was abcb. But then the third one was abCC. And the fourth was abab.

If the goal was to demonstrate the versatility of the quatrain form, you might want to articulate that a bit more in the notes at the bottom of the piece (i.e., that you're intentionally playing with the form), otherwise I might humbly suggest aiming for a more consistent rhythm or structure from quatrain to quatrain so that the reader's focus isn't pulled away from the content and toward trying to figure out what the internal structure of the poem is supposed to be.


*Train* Overall

Overall, I thought this was a really enjoyable item to read. I loved the contest and while I think there's a bit of improvement that could be made in execution, it doesn't change the fact that this was a very effective, engaging piece. Nice work!


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Positives

I liked the worldbuilding that you established in this piece. In only a few short paragraphs, you created a mythology about shifters, and included information about how they fit into the rest of society. That's not easy to do in a piece of this length. Great job!


Suggestions

Given the different cultural associations with shifters, I was hoping for a little more information on what a shifter is in this story you've created. For example, are shifters full shape-changers that can become creatures indistinguishable from humans (like Mystique in the X-Men universe), or are they humanoids who can change or modify some of their features but do not fully transformer (like Shifters from Dungeons & Dragons)?

If it's the former, and shapeshifters are able to fully become other creatures (like humans, for example), it might be worth spending more time to explain how society knows about them and why shapeshifters have a hard time integrating into society when they can literally take the form of members of society to blend in.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this premise for a story and I think you're off to a great start. There's some room to flesh things out a bit, but a solid foundation is already in place for you to expand upon. Nice work!


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this poem. In just a few short lines, you were able to create something that was evocative, easy to read, and really resonant. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I really enjoyed reading this "about me" item. You included a lot of really quirky, fun details and contrasted that nicely with some more nuanced statements that give us a better, deeper understanding of who you are. I thought this was a light, quick read that was well-balanced between entertaining and informative. Well done!


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No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this item.


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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought your imagery and your structure were great, which made it an easy, engaging read. The personification of the sun was a fantastic idea for a poem!


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Overall

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Positives

I liked the brief and poignant nature of these lyrics. I thought the imagery was well done and compelling. Nice work!


Suggestions

There were a few places where I think some clarity or revision is needed. The second line, for example, is missing an article. Should it be "A mark of a kiss" instead of "A mark of kiss"? Similarly, I think the "Want it constantly" line might be better phrased with a subject, such as "I want it constantly".


Overall

Overall, I think you're off to a good start here. A little polish is needed just to round the piece out a bit, but you're definitely off to a great start. Well done!


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Positives

I found this piece really compelling and interesting. I've always been fascinated by re-enactors, and you did a great job of detailing your interest in the hobby as well as communicating the details of your experience with the paranormal. It was a very engaging read.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought this was a really interesting item. Well done!


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Positives

I enjoyed reading this episodic outline. I can definitely see the inspiration from the source material and you did a great job of fleshing it out and providing enough detail for the reader to get a clear picture of the story and the characters. You also did a good job incorporating a lot of the characters from the Spider-Man universe.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. I like the fact that you're presenting multiple haiku on different topics all in one static item. A singular haiku in its own item with no context can sometimes feel a little anemic, so I really like the fact that you've combined a few different ones here for additional texture.


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Overall

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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. It was concise, to the point, and you did a great job of providing enough description for the reader to easily follow along without getting mired in the details.


Suggestions

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Overall, I enjoyed the read. Nice work!


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