Awesome poetry this is with colorful trees and imaginative birds among them. Who could.have thought of such things. I bet.a.colorful squirrel.could live there too.
This is a beautiful story that I wish I could have written. It is incredible with tiny animals that help make dreams.come true. Your imagination is beautiful too. I love your characters like Sparkle Emily and Justice.
I like this poem. In Bible prayers are like poems. Yes, I would think the Bible is a good reference for inspiration. God created man so it understood that words of inspiration and.creativity is there to.
I have created poetry in the past myself and sometimes surprised at myself that I wrote such. It is amazing and lovely work that my mind has created and here in your poetry. You have imagination too.Thanks.
Seems like a love between two but one loves the other much more. The one that tries to love can't understand her love for him or vice versus. That is what life is sometimes. Now true love is one.where both loves each other.
Wow. This is good. Christmas is my favorite time of year except my husband did in that month and mom. Love t b e music and peace and gifts etc. Yes Christmas is a joyous occasion. On.the 14 and 28. I just go through it with good memories.to.combat.the love ones lost...I love peppermint too
This is interesting. I wrote a poem once on. What If. You can put anything and answer.it what if.
What if life suddenly stop? W hat is sky was upside down? There is a lot of whats ifs?
Why wouldn't you want to be here?There is something is this whole.universe you like. Why did God make the stars to shine, so we could see. Nobody sees God though. Im not sure if I want to until IM READY.There is a lot of why's in this world today that we may never find out the answers to.
What a story! This is good. Th at proves that weird things may turn out the best especially since you put you in t hat recipe too. If thus is a.story it is.fantastic. if it is somewhat true thats better.
I like what you said. It sounds like you live somewhere else than AMERICA. It may not be much to you but. I AM ONE OF THOSE AMERICANS. I haven't been anywhere else. I pray that everyone can know God and his words. I know there is much hatred in the world today.I believe love is the key. I believe everyone has good thoughts but not good actions at times. Im not saying anything bad about my Country now.
Wow!You did have a long journey. Glad you found out about your brother. I loved your Story of your wanderings. Glad you weren't mad at the end either. Too much hatred in the world anyway. Now what do you do is the question ? Im sure you are the only one that can figure it out . God bless you!
You got that right. I like what you said. You are right. Why would people bully someone in the first place. It took place in school when I went then too
a nd I guess it always will no matter what. God does know everything too . I may not be able to see it but one day everybody will beleve him. Thanks
Wow!that's good!If only a.dog.could talk and understand. It would be easier to deal with Through a picture window. YOu might peek and see all them colorful birds doing their thing. All them questions are interesting.
Aren't cats wonderful though. Didn't get to know kittens and cats till a few years ago. After my husband passed away, I wondered what to do with myself. It took a 3 till 5 years to really get over his death..lm not really over him but can talk about it now without balling anyway. My daughter gave me a kitten. It was a he kitten which turned into a he cat. I had him a year when I had that virus that loads of people has had and some died from. Anyway suddenly he went out of window and he hasnt been back. I called it Huggy. Since then I have had Precious, Sweet Pea and a few kittens. I come to love girl kittens. One thing I learned though .Im going to fix. So they want get pregnant.
Yes cats can be a mess at times and I had many time scrathes but they are lots of company.
Now I dont believe you dont matter. You do matter to some one I know. God loves you. You must have someone that cares for you. It is hard to believe that you dont matter. Everybody feels that way occasionaly but not all the time Im hoping . I felt that way seven years ago when husband past away. But going to church more helped me tremendously. I know if you get in church and get to know God ,Jesus, and the Lord things will turn around. If you need a friend right now though I will be your friend.
Congratulations. In a.month I need an upgrade too. What did you do for an upgrade. Thanks for listening. Maybe. I can get one. Im.not sure how.much it has been a long time.since. I was.really in here. Love it though. I love writing when I can. I thought you could do that but wasnt sure. Good write up to me.
Interesting poetry. I love it cause. I do believe in angels. My mom has wind chime that is beautiful and it was from. Before dad he passed.Now. i wonder if they are together and is talking about that wind.cjime that makes a loud noise when the wind blows. Im.thinking that my parents.are somehow protecting me especially during thunder storm. Your dog protects.you too.Thanks for the memorie
Awesome poem. I like unicorns too. I wish they were real to takeaway this evil nearly everyday. I guess its this world we are living in now. I dont like dark horror stuff around me. Even my grandkids chat that way. If an unicorn was real and pegasus too this world would be better place where God can create his mysteries of wonder with glee. Keep it up.
I like the sun too. Love it compared to weeks of rainy weather.
Flowers make for beautiful earth too.
With God's help everything is beautiful and bright.
I love rainbows and sunbeams that come out after a shower or two. If you were having a bad day just watching the sky can lend you to a pretty lovely day after all and therefore your mood changes too. You want have a bad day either.
Wow. Comical in a way. Nice to take a nursery rhyme and turn it twisted or whatever to make it different. Thats cool. After you do that awhile, you want be bored with your own writings. You might get inspiration too.
Nice little poem. You dont have to garden to look for birds and perhaps wonder where he is going or has he or she has a little ones nested in a tiny nest somewhere. If this was an unigue red bird you
might if you can take a pic.I love birds and plants too.
Wow. To me The Wandering Wind could be a good title for this lovely poem. God makes the wind, the light, rainbow and you. The wind you can feel,light you can see, rainbow you can see if you look up high and you can see and feel yourself with the help of God and you can live much better and not be lonely.
It could be some presidential inauguration. In any event it sounds like a happy affair maybe an end of of the year event like next year grade maybe. There might be some worries but as time come close the fears disappear and joy takes its place. Yes this.could be a graduation too. Whether inauguration or graduation there is joy for the most part. Good write.
Awesome. This.sounds good. Yea, everyone seems to like that game of hide. Me. I hated it cause. I was the one that taught my kids that and they wanted to play over and over. God loves us you and me. He does protects the ones that love him. I could not live without knowing that God loves me and protects me. Since my husband is in heaven now after December 2014 I could.not.function without the knowledge that he is real and has my hubby with him. My mom is gone now two as of December 2019. And. I have to believe that she is with dad too.
Fall is pretty pleasant until it gets colder. I love the colors of the trees. Personally I love. Thanksgiving and Christmas the very best holidays. This is good.
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