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6 Public Reviews Given
6 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I am easy going I do not review to correct grammar because I suck at grammar. I review to give positive reinforcement and encourage the person whoms work I am reviewing to continue.
I'm good at...
Spelling,and writing.
Favorite Genres
Heart felt, and personal experience
Least Favorite Genres
not any least favorite genres
Favorite Item Types
I personally like to write poetry and short-stories whether they are fiction or non-fiction.
Least Favorite Item Types
There is no least favorite types for me.
Public Reviews
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Review by AVONLady Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I felt that the story was well thought out and very well planned. It dragged a little bit in the beginning for about the first three minutes I did not know what the plot was and then as I read on I caugt on. I am very interested in reading more how this author fits into the story or as you stated very snugly. That has peaked my curiosity, I feel you have a real good start and a good bases ase to where you want to go with the story. I feel it would do some good for you so it doesn't drag on for a the first few minutes to use more descriptive to spice it up a little bit. Other than that your story is off to a good start and keep up the good work.
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Review by AVONLady Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yellow Rose,
I really felt how you portrayed a rose and love it was beautiful. It is true that love can fade just as fast a rose can. Its like you are talking about an experience you had whether it be bad or good I do not know. I encourage you to keep up the writting of poetry.
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Review by AVONLady Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel that this short story was well put together, I like the reference to Gabriel the Angel talking to the child and asking why the child runs.
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