Well done! Your words strike directly to the reader's heart. As I read your poem I could almost feel the pain and dispair in your words. The feeling of relief, hope and freedom can be felt in the last two lines. You were rescued! Great work! keep writing.
Good story! I especially like your description of the blood and how it flows and changes. I could envision the blood flowing and finally violently hitting the floor.
I felt the passion with which you wrote this piece. At first I even thought that you were describing a personal experience.
The ending was great in the way you summed up the story helping us understand what happened and why.
Great job! Keep writing! I look forward to reading more of your writings.
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