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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. As a Theravadin Buddhist, I find this poem to be a wonderful tribute to the Tathagata.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel that this was creative, however I criticize a lack of punctuation that makes the second verse feel a bit odd. Other than that, I like the rhyme scheme, and am intrigued by the use of such an unorthodox, almost parody, approach to poetry, and the fact that this is done with a 2-verse limerick.
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