The intro very vividly describes our monotonous and busy life. +1 for a great start.
Then, the theme of the poem comes into picture where the desires of one's heart is portrayed in the form of a dream. Some abstract ideas of horses galloping in the sky and how the poet wants to roam in the jungle, living a carefree and adventurous life, are really eye-catching. Then, with a smooth transition, the poet's idea of love and the appearance of his/her lover is being conveyed quite elegantly.It ends on a hopeful note. The poet is ready to dream again even though dreams do not come true always. The poet is happy and shall venture into the unknown lands in his/her dreams again and shall conquer them someday.
This is my idea of the poem. I would like to say sorry in advance because it may so happen that I failed to understand the idea behind the word(s).
Keep dreaming! Keep writing! :)
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