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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This first chapter was excellent. The description, the feeling of the vampire came through, yet I ouldn't see her, I wanted to see what she looked like. I loved the way the story moved along. It held me and at no time was I bored.
Thank you for allowing me to read it.
Keep writing.
Jackieboy
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