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Review by JarodShaw Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
I honeastly think this poem needs a lot of work. More commas, pauses, and diction. But good idea for a poem though. Always hittem where it hurts, the heart.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This poem really gave off an intimate vibe. I enjoyed reading this because everybody has wanted somebody they couldnt have.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this poem
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