Nice article on too much information. NO misspellings or grammatical errors.
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My favorite aspect of your article is your expression of information overload.
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Item # 2033112
Review of : Displacement Nes Garrow - intro [13+]
By:Pseudonymous BN
Review By: express
I enjoyed reading your story.
Favorite: Let your imagination tell the tale!
No grammatical errors or typographical mistakes.
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Very well written.
Item # 2024760
Review of: Be Original, Make Things Happen [E]
By: express
I like the topic originality.
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When you refer to someone who is original try to note what their specific invention or accomplishment is.We all need to be ourselves.
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No misspellings or typographical errors.
Item# 2027858
Review of: Short forms ~ Attitude [E]
by : Prashant Pandey
Review by: express
Read your writing to make sure you are using the correct tense of a word.
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Your article is very nice. Sometimes the abbreviations used on social media are difficult to understand.
Item# 2027485
Review of: Press Release New York [E]
By: joe joe
Review by: express
Nice Press Release!
Your Press Release makes me hungry for a good burger! Which is just what a Press Release should do!
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Suggestion: The Kitchen Kings are Introducing a new kitchen appliance.
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Keep Writing! I enjoyed you article. Your description of elderly confusion is very good.
I noticed no spelling errors.
I am a little disappointed. I was waiting for her guests to arrive.
Item # 1909581
Review of : The Words We Never Say [E]
By: Angels in my Ear's Auction
Review by: express
I like your poem very much!
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There are many things better left not said or written down.
You expertly conveyed the pain of not being able to write something to someone else.
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Review by: Express
I like this poem. A interesting poem.
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I liked your usage of old English.
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I did not see any grammatical or spelling errors.
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No misspellings or grammatical errors.
Interesting and imaginative.
Keep Writing! A very interesting setting; busy and chaotic but relaxing. I enjoyed reading your imaginative article.
Review of Item # 2003431
Angels Blood [E]
By: Taylor
Review by: express
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My favorite part; reading through old journals. A very nice touch.Your story is unique. Nice Story! I did not see any errors in grammar or spelling.I enjoyed reading your story.
Item # 1359260
Review of: Hannah's Christmas Gift [E]
By: Harry
Review By : express
Heartwarming!
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My favorite aspect is the way you crafted the Depression era into the story.
I did not see any grammatical errors. Hannah's character is easy to relate to.
Thanks for your refreshing Thanksgiving poem.
I enjoyed the read.
Keep Writing!Some of your poem did not make sense to me. However that is your creative option.
I enjoyed your poem.
express
A very nice poem. Secrets can be very complex.
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I did not see any grammatical errors.
Secrets needs to be more upbeat. Overall I enjoyed your poem very much.
Item # 2019987
Review of: What is considered success? [E]
By: Survivor48
Review by: express
I liked your free verse about success.
I did not notice any grammatical errors or inaccuracies .
I would like to have see a longer poem.
Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Well written!
I liked "The Colorless" very much! It is well written. You captured the pain the artist must be it very well.That is my favorite aspect of your story.
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I did not see any typographical mistakes.
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express
Your article "Looking into God's Assurance" touched me deeply. I needed to read your article this evening! Thank-you for your honest tribute to God's love.
Your article is well written. I did not observe any grammatical errors.
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My favorite aspect of your article is your expression of deep trust in God!
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Review of Item # 1955225
Autumn (E)
Poem entry for The Writing Muscle Stretch
By: Carly - doing JuNoWriMo
Review by: express
I enjoyed you poem very much! Your descriptions are breathtaking. Keep Writing!
I did not see any grammatical or typographical mistakes.
I think your poem could be a little longer.
Autumn is very well written. Your poetry is an inspiration to me!
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Review of: Diamond in The Rough [E]
A poem written back when I was a teenager.
By: Fancy
Item # 1224851
Review by: express
I enjoyed your poem very much! I like the use of simple language to describe a teenager's thoughts.
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I did not see any grammatical errors.
There is a nice rhythmic pattern to your poem.
You captured a teenager's blossoming into a women beautifully.
I would like to see this poem a little bit longer.
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express
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