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Review of The Better Half  
Review by janice39
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Such a good write. I so enjoyed it.
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Review of Because  
Review by janice39
Rated: E | (3.5)
I loved the poem
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128
Review of I Am  
Review by janice39
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this.
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Review of My Angel  
Review by janice39
Rated: E | (3.0)
Well, it seems you have strong emotional ties to this young lady. In the first sentence, hate has a capital letter. In the last verse, you wrote 'and my soul 'feel'. That should be 'feels' First verse, 'to get shoved...away.' You might want to put that sentence like this. To get shoved away. Keep writing.
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