I like the story quite a bit, it really has fueled some shrinking fetishes I have, and especially because of Bianca. I have trouble reading about any of the Aunts, or parents, however, because I just don't like the idea of shrunk with the family enough (probably because I am still young and live with my family...). If it's someone like Bianca or sister character, I just imagine them not related to me in any way.
Though I think the idea and the way everything plays out it a 5 star, I must only give a 4 for occasional errors and at one point the story shifts and gets characters mixed up (or something like that). But other then that I really like it and I'm hoping more people will add (I might add to it myself, but haven't tried writing anything yet). Peace
-James
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