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Review of Passion's sake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Here is my review of "Passion's sake".

Great title, who can resist a bit of passion? *Bigsmile*
I like the structure of this poem, and found reading it enjoyable.
I also like the way the meaning is there but so much is left to the readers imagination and interpretation.

Thank You. Jam *Smile*
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Review of Lost Souls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, here is my review of Lost Souls,

I liked this a lot, very well written and good use of words, almost poetic in content.
I think there may be a few gramatical errors, although i'm not qualified enough myself in grammar to know for definate, therefore I will not reduce the rating.
I enjoyed reading this descriptive dark, piece.

Thank you
JAM

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Review of All I Want  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, here is my review of All I Want,

Title:- Good title, reflected within the poem.

Rhyme/Rhythm:- An unusual rhyme and rhythm that works well.

Reaction:- A very sweet love poem

Overall impression:- Very cute little poem, well written.

Thank you
JAM

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Review of Boston Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Eliot, here is my review of "Boston Poem".

Title:- Fitting title, appropriate to the poem.

Free style, good use of words,

Reaction:- A well written poem, I presume it was written on the road to Boston. *Smile*

Overall impression:- Good descriptive poem, well written.

Thank you
JAM

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Review by Jam Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Maryann.

Just wanted to say what a great c.Note shop you have here.
Great Images, and some really good messages.

Thank You
JAM

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, here is my review of "The Streets of San Juan.

Great Title, nice use of the prompt.

Nice rhyme and rhythm, a lovely flow to this song.

My reaction was one of enjoying the story unfolding, when I read your words.

My overall impression is a very good job, well written and most enjoyable. Would love to hear it in audio some day.

Thank You
JAM
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, here is my review of Confessions of Love.

Title:- Nice title, the writer is concluding with a confession of love.

Rhyme/rhythm:- Free verse poem with a difference. A good flow.

Reaction:- Bitter- sweet and to the point. A rather poignant message.

Overall reaction:- A good read, tell your sister well done from me! *Smile*

Thank you
JAM

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Review of Follow Your Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, here is my review of Follow Your Heart.

Title:- Great title, encouragement to follow your heart and do the right thing.

Rhyme/rhythm:- Great rhyme and rhythm and a nice gentle flow to this poem.

Reaction:- A lovely heart-felt message being sent. My favorite part was the fourth verse.

Overall Impression:- Super poem, well written and most enjoyable to read.

Thank you
JAM
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, here is my review for Season of Discontent.

I saw this featured in the comedy newsletter. Very funny little story, with a lot of humor. First thing i've read today and a great start for my day.
I particularly like your perspective as a "bull" character.
The way it is written is a bonus for me, a simple and effective style.
My favorite part was the sentance beginning:- Finding my place...
Oh and nice purse, by the way.*Smile*

Thank you
JAM
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Review of Cinderella  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, here is my review for Cinderella.

Title:- Good title, I take it this is how you saw your friend, having been treated badly.

Rhyme/Rhythm:- Nice rhyme and rhythm

Reaction:- You must be a wonderful friend to have felt so much for your friend and written this lovely poem for her. A nice message.

Overall Impression:- An enjoyable read, and a very good poem.

Thank you
JAM

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Review of A Sister Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I am reviewing on behalf of Rogue for the package you won. Well done. *Smile*

Here is my review of A Sister Lost.

Title:- A great title, that captures the theme of the poem and draws the reader in.

A lovely descriptive emotional free style poem.

For me it painted a picture of heartbreak from a sisters point of view. Something has gone terribly wrong and yet the memory of how you used to be, sharing and caring.

Overall a well written descriptive poem about a sisters love. It brings to mind the thought that people change, but not always for the better.

Thank You
JAM

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Review of Grounded  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, I am reviewing on behalf of Rogue for the package you won. Well done. *Smile*

Here is my review for Grounded.

Title:-Good limerick title. Such a tricky task I think.

Rhyme/rhythm:- Funky fun rhyme and rhythm, in traditional limerick form.

This piece of fun made me smile. A good fun read, and good use of the prompt.

Thank you
JAM
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Review of (Bud)ding Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I am reviewing on behalf of Rogue, for the package you won. Well done.*Smile*

Here is my review of (Bud)ding Love.

Title:- well thought out title and very cute.

A free verse poem with a quirky fun theme.

An unusual theme, and a very enjoyable poem to read. I particularly liked your use of color and it added a lot to the descriptiveness of the poem.

Overall a nice and refreshing change to read something so different. Good use of words.

Thank You
JAM

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, here is my review of Lost Boys and Miracles.

Title: A great title taken from Peter Pan. It has so much meaning in a poem of this nature.

A lovely free verse poem with a good flow and a heart wrenching story to tell.

My reaction is one of sorrow, but then joy as you find your magical place where all is wonderful.

Overall Impression is that this is a well written piece, full of emotion and hope to share with others.

Thank you
JAM

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Review of The Dinner Party  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, here is my review of The Dinner Party.

I like this a lot. The only thing is that (being naturally nosey by nature) I would like to know what the questions and answers were. Am I missing the point? Probably knowing me.
Well written.
Thank you
JAM
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, here is my review of The Praying-Mantis.

Good descriptive words used to describe this curious creature. I particularly like the line Saintly and divine. Are they really saintly though?

Thanks
JAM

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I saw your poem in the Poetry Newsletter. Here is my review.

The Last One Standing is a great title for this poem.

Great rhyme and rhythm, I could almost hear a drum bean and marching sound as i read the poem aloud.

Good imigary of a man in battle and good use of words to describe the scene.

Overall a good poem and an enjoyable read.

Thank you
JAM

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Review of Dani and Mikael  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, here is my review of Dani and Mikael.

Title is good, the names of your grandchildren.

A good flow when reading aloud.

Nice typical brother and sister relationship told from a grandparents perspective.

Overall, a nice enjoyable read about the antics of two young grandchildren.

Thank you
JAM

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Review of All That I See  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Here is my review for All That I See.

Title: A very appropriate title, and i like the way it is the theme throughout.

Rhyme/Rhythm: There is a lovely descriptive flow to this non rhyming poem, and the line "you are all that I see", brings the rhythm of the poem together nicely.

Reaction: Very romantic, heartfelt and yearning.

Suggestions: Nothing, i like it just as it is.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed reading this poem, and I do like a bit of romance. There is a nice feeling to this poem and a good use of words.

Thank you.
JAM
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Review of Crushing Ego  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, I enjoyed this piece. Here are some observations.
1. Plot: The theme was easy to read and understandable, there was a good flow to the chapter.
2. Setting: Your descriptive words enabled me to visualize the scenes in my mind.
3. Characters: I found the characters believable, I liked the way you described them in detail, and brought them to life.
4. Grammar/Spelling/Dialog: The dialog was very good, and very fitting to each character. I myself am still learning a lot about grammar and paragraphing etc. I did notice a few things, that you may or may not want to consider.
a) Speech spacing: I have been encouraged to leave a space before and after speech, for example:

"Alas!", cried the broad built, chiseled faced man.

"Deia, say it isn't so! Has Anaj really been imprisoned?"

b) A few spelling or typing errors i noticed: I think this could be easily rectified by just reading through and editing.

My overall opinion is that i would like to read more like this, i found it interesing and entertaining.
Thank you.

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