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Review by Lynn Gilchrist Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi

I enjoyed this work, as I do almost the same type of writing at times. I put me in mind of a Lovecraft tale.
Do you have more of it?
I would love to have more characters in this story, perhaps you can write another chapter, this being the very first chapter with many more to follow.

I feel it has a great beginning and you should by all means continue it.

Lynn Gilchrist
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