The imagery is amazing my dear :)! Your poem gives off this unbelievable, and wonderful essence of paradise. I simply love it! All I can say :)
Nice work cuzz ;)
I like this poem because of its simplicity.
Its a comforting thing to read, as if I can trust this is what my friends are trying to say.
Thank you for the read!
Write on & Take care,
Lynn~
Awee! By the sounds of it I'd say you have a remarkable son :)
It's a great gift, to be able to lighten the weight of the atmosphere like that.
Love this!
This is one of the most amazing things I have ever read. You really made me think about how we always seem to be so busy wanting what we cant have, that we never really stop to take the time to appreciate what we already have. I am so glad I stumbled across this!
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