Hi,
I dont normally review but i felt i must tell you how much this affected me.
For a start its beautifully written, the kind of writing where you have to read it aloud just so you can feel its eloquence on your own lips.
And secondly it baffled me, because its dark, but it feels light, its sad but it feels also quite weightless and I feel as though your protagonist has not lost hope because she had kept herself from falling over the edge by replaying all the things that have kept her sane.
Please continue this. I know it may be difficult but for purely selfish reasons i want to know more about her, more about her story.
Thankyou for sharing this with the world
Hannah
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