Please continue!! I'd love some more! Maybe you can make another part where they get married, have sex and children. It is so descriptive and beautifully written, you are a very very good writer that I'd like to ask how do you write like that? Keep up the great work!
This poem is really good!
I love how at the end of the berry part it went from there to the fruits part!
I really think that you should write another one continuing this or a different one!
Keep up the good work!
Maybe you should change the title to Berries and Fruits.
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